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Re: Deadwood
Geez, June, leave a little reviewing for the rest of us! :D Just kidding! Anyway, ignore the fact that Juniper has given you a review for the time being. I'm ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: What if...?
I loved this poem! Unfortunately, I couldn't find anything wrong with it other than the things that June pointed out. Well, actually, I did think that the flow of the ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Poetry
I love your poem. Here are some of the mistakes: from when I rise [s]to[/s] 'till the dawn birds fall drowsy, shouldn't it be 'till, and not to? Here: Not ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: It's pissing me off, but i think i love you
I love the concept of the poem, but the way you word it is kind of... well, to be quite frank, it sucks. I'm sorry if that's harsh, but the ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: And the Werecat Stalks into the Night...
Hey, I'm Rika Valentine, or just Rika is fine, and I suppose this is where I tell a whole bunch of personal information about myself, right? :shock: This place is ...
Apr 29, 2009
